Feedback on Rough Cut 4

I decided to try get feedback on as many different rough cuts as possible. I asked 4 people a set few questions about the rough cuts and got their advise.

Are there any improvements that you believe should be made?
Josh Beattie - The music doesn't really fit maybe change it completely or just make some changes to what you already have
Freddie Vaughan - The match cuts do not last long and its just kinda a blur not very clear
Wendy Hey - The narrative still isnt completely clear so i think it would be good if you worked on that
Beth Campbell - Nothing huge just slight alterations

Is there any part to the film which you enjoyed the most?
Josh Beattie - Yeah, i though the chase scene was exciting and interesting really enjoyed that part
Freddie Vaughan - Love the chase
Wendy Hey - I really like the match cuts, favourite part
Beth Campbell - The main chase scene was great

What would you give the music a rating out of 10?
Josh Beattie - 6
Freddie Vaughan -8
Wendy Hey - 7
Beth Campbell - 7

What would you give the editing a rating out of 10?
Josh Beattie - 9
Freddie Vaughan - 8
Wendy Hey - 9
Beth Campbell - 9

What would you give the cinematography a rating out of 10?
Josh Beattie - 8
Freddie Vaughan -8
Wendy Hey - 9
Beth Campbell - 7

What would you rate the location for our film in relation to the genre out of 10?
Josh Beattie - 7
Freddie Vaughan -9
Wendy Hey - 8
Beth Campbell - 7

Were you engaged or bored while watching our film opening?
Josh Beattie - With the added music i enjoy it alot more than previously
Freddie Vaughan - I think its a good film opening and i am intrigued into what happens next
Wendy Hey - I was kinda bored, not a huge fan of movies within this genre
Beth Campbell - A lot more enjoyable than rough cut 1

Was the narrative clear in our film opening?

Josh Beattie - Yeah id say so
Freddie Vaughan - slightly just got to work on explaining those match cuts
Wendy Hey - yeah
Beth Campbell - yep, quite clear

What would you rate the film opening out of 10?
Josh Beattie - 7
Freddie Vaughan - 7
Wendy Hey - 8
Beth Campbell - 7